Well, the huge red spot caught my attention, then I read the note. I get the idea but it doesn't really convey it very well. I think it can work if it's kind of subtle, like a more anatomically correct dog but with some parts that are just wrong, the subtle nosebleed, maybe in-grown claws, screwed up teeth... Maybe some clearly superficial-looking and oblivious person looking very proud of their cute dog, while it is clearly in suffering.
But I suppose the massive red patch of blood (?) did make me actually click your picture and look, so something worked.
Pugs actually have very funny personalities. I know someone who's adopted a few over the years from shelters where they'd been discarded. Real shame many dog breeds are treated like a fashion accessory.